What if….

There was no crimes

Was peace and no war

No sickness

 

 

What If there was no war and live was all peace? Would everyone be happy and the needs and wants not be so much in the culture life? I thinkg if there was al peacde I think there would less violence in our world, there owul dbe a lot more respect for others and people would be more caring to help one anonter instead of acting as if it was a burdon ourt of there dalily routines. There would be no armies that no one would have to fight in a war and have that chanced of dieing and people losing there loved ones. If ther was no war and peace there wouldn’t be child abuse or murdering poieple would be happy about themselves and not have depression. What If there was no war, there would be no gangs well atleast no bad gangs. Isacs wouldn’t be efven known and no worries about looking ove r your back to make sure notyhing bad was coming to get you. Sept 11 wouldn’t hve happned and all those children wouldn’t have had to see and know they was going to die and explode in an airplane. PeaCE why couldn’t it only be peeave and no war? Does our culture crave violence as long as it isn’t halppyeing to them? What if peace was the only thing and no war in the hole world? I think people could live happier and not worry as much as they do today. There would be no honking, no yelling, no fighting, no hurting other people because you are stressed or you don’t like what they are doing. What if there was no war? Families wuooldnt have to be brokien up years at a time yu wouldn’t have to move every three yrs. Countries wouldn’t have to spend money on military ghings they couold use al those billioksn on somethingelse.

 

No sickness
End to hatred

 

What if there was no hatred? If theer was no hatred everyone would ove orlike and everyone would feel liked and have friends and no enemies. (theer wuld be no buliies) what if there was an end to hatred the internet wouldn’tahve so many mean things on it. I think there would bel ess sucides. People wouldn’t yell or scream bc that is paert of a hatred thing when you hate the way other people drive or walk in the store.  Hatred is a mean thingk to have to hate something so bad. What if hteer was end to hatred? Everyone would be one race , one income, one family, and be one nation. End to hatred is to love yourself inner self and be happy and not to worry about others and theer hatreds. It is easy to get in to something like the media and hate someone or something because what a another person says on there. You have to respect people and know that everyone makes faults and if htea si the way thiey want to cact so be it let them as long as it isn’t hurting anyone. Hatred does involeve hurting other people because something you hate they might love. Being face forward about your opoinoj people lmight loike it kor they moight niot they might hate youo for that reason. I nkwo a radio person that does and aot of people don’t like her for it. But that is who sihe is and if you dint want the trutgh then you shouldn’t of asked. What if there was end to hatred? Animals, humans, or anthing wouldn’t be hurt then and just loved like they aresurpose to bel ved not betrayed. Hate is a WORD THAT can be a strong hurtful word. Like saying ti to your parents then they aren’t there next day.

What’s in the Way

 

If I didn’t have to worry about how my rent was going to get paid if my sister didn’t pay my car payment and if they are going to take it away. My husband and how he could do this to his family that he said he loved so much. Him not giving no support to his children. How I am going to take care of them and make sure they are okay and going to make it. How he doesn’t see his kids. Mainly rent is the biggest thing and when our bankruptcy is going to be over so we can move on with our lives. How he hurts my kids so much. Waiting for a call for a job interview and getting the job. Getting a pay check to take care of my problems I have that will take care of a lot of my stress. It is going to be hard full time student full time job taking care of three kids. I can do it,  just getting there and having the stable of being able to take care of my finances. Making sure that my kids have a roof over their head and not being stressed by other people.

 I liked writing all of them, but since I have to choose one I would say the courage paper. It helped me keep my courage through the semester and made me realize I had more courage in myself than I thought I ever had. I have to say the one least thing I didn't like was posting it on blogger and coming out of my box, but since it was about the least favorite writing in this class it would be, writing about something to blue, It was hard to pick one thing about blue and then write about it without really thinking about it and being timed on it. I would have to say the "Fear", "Happiness", and "Stress", It made me write about true feelings and it made me see I was putting things in front of me to let me feel I couldn't do things. As soon as I came to this realization of letting me be me and trust in myself, I could do anything in live that I want to and no one can get in that way. The thing I would change out of this class is to be more creative and more thoughtful on my writing because I think it would make the stories more interesting to the reader to have more creative writing in stories. Writing on a topic that was just given to you and being timed on them, It is the being timed on is more stress and not enough time to think of what you want to write to get a good interesting story. I would study more and not let things get to me as much so I could focus better on my schooling. That I can come with pretty funny stories in a timed atmosphere, don't be afraid to put things out there they are your thoughts and it doesn't matter what others think. I think you are really good teacher Mrs. A, I don't think you need to change anything, I loved coming to class, if I was having a bad morning I would remember I had your class to come to and it would cheer me up because you always had good spirits when you came to class. I would give myself an A, I helped out in groups, I didn't miss much class, and I think I wrote good stories. All in all I did my best in this class. 

• Which in class writing was your favorite? Why?
• Which in class writing was your least favorite? Why?
• Review all your writing chronologically (earliest to latest). List three interesting observations or changes in your writing. Which are the most profound (obvious and important)? Why?
• If you could change anything about your writing this semester what would it be? Why?
• What did you like best about this course?
• What did you like least about this course?
• What would you have done differently this semester if you could have a do-over?
• What did learn about yourself as a student, a thinker, a writer this semester?
• What could I, Ms. A., have done differently to improve the course?
• You begin this course with an engagement and participation score of an A.  Attendance, participation in activities and group work help you to maintain this grade.  Evaluate yourself and assign yourself a grade for the in class portion of this course.  Don’t forget the reasoning behind your self assigned grade.

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